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Two Lovers in 1727 by ~Neverstaysin1house:iconNeverstaysin1house:

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Dearest William,

Everyday I see you
my heart stings
my brain pounds
And my stomache grows wings

Everytime I hear you
my feet tap
my eyes flutter
The nearest thing is clasped

Everytime I think of you
my everything just fades away
my lips stutter
And I silently pray
that you will stay
Just a little while longer

But sadly it can never be
For you are the same sex as me

Im sorry
Sincerely, Oliver
©2008-2009 ~Neverstaysin1house
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to my lovely trevor I thought you could relate as well as myself to this one
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~Indigo-inside:iconIndigo-inside: Apr 29, 2008, 6:58:17 PM
wow, that's really deep ;w;
amazing use of words! Nice work :D

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~canticum:iconcanticum: Apr 29, 2008, 7:00:31 PM
Nice XD
bit of a twist there, no?
I like it.
~Jefffy:iconJefffy: Apr 29, 2008, 7:01:03 PM
Hmmmm, I could say I technically relate, but not really cuz they is ded now...

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The soothing wind against my face, the gentle evening's rain.
Here in the land of Moose and Geese
I wash away my pain.

"Moscow
Old but nevertheless young
Until Eternity"
-Dschinghis Khan
~Neverstaysin1house:iconNeverstaysin1house: Apr 29, 2008, 7:01:38 PM
thanx I feel sorry for the people in those times really

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~Indigo-inside:iconIndigo-inside: Apr 29, 2008, 7:02:42 PM
yeah, same with me

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~Neverstaysin1house:iconNeverstaysin1house: Apr 29, 2008, 7:03:56 PM
awwwe im sry hunn:( ...I NO! *hugs!!!!!!!!*

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The world would be better off if adults would just go back to kindergaten
~Neverstaysin1house:iconNeverstaysin1house: Apr 29, 2008, 7:04:35 PM
lol the twist gives personality i agree^^

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~Jefffy:iconJefffy: Apr 29, 2008, 7:17:18 PM
Thanks. -hugs-

^-^

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The soothing wind against my face, the gentle evening's rain.
Here in the land of Moose and Geese
I wash away my pain.

"Moscow
Old but nevertheless young
Until Eternity"
-Dschinghis Khan
~cantreturn2you:iconcantreturn2you: Apr 30, 2008, 11:22:08 AM
i love it. its so sad no one that was different in those times were free. they were all looked down apon. like in brave heart where the english king pushes his sons guy lover out of a window. it was funny tho...and vry sad.lol

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Shoot for the moon, if you miss you'll land among the stars
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